Week 13 Blog #2

Since my research paper was peer reviewed on Monday I have viewed grammar problems as my priority. I read through my paper again and couldn’t find a lot that I thought I needed to improve on. I disagree with putting too much emotion in a research paper because I believe that doesn’t make it as formal as it should be. I believe that you must state your opinions about the topic in your thesis and through the information, quotes, and evidence you put in the paper. The grammar issues were the only basic ones in the paper that I saw as needed to be fixed mostly. There were also a couple MLA citation problems that could be improved on. For example, when I did in text citations I did not put the period in the correct place. I also had to changed the names of the sources to make them correctly cited.