Week 13 Blog #1

Before my research was viewed today I believed that it had many strengths and weaknesses. Its strengths appeared to be the facts and quotes used as evidence in the paper. I also believed that the sources were very strong and helped me a ton with the paper. The movie especially was very helpful because it was exactly what my paper was about and didn’t leave anything out. My weaknesses were the clearness of my argument and the ways to fix the problem in my paper. For example, the solution to what I’m argument is very hard to decide how to fix the problems that are occurring in the horse world. It was hard for me to tell how many weaknesses my paper had because most of it wall all facts laid out to support my thesis and it had barely any of my personal opinion in it. It didn’t have a lot of emotion in it because I was taught to not put emotion in my research papers because that isn’t very formal.